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The “Connected Experience”...
In commercial trucking, a “Connected Experience” occurs when the right technologies come together to enable seamless communication between Vehicles, Dealers, & Customers.
Of course this requires vehicles to be on-line. And the fact is, over 80% of commercial vehicles today are not.
But not for long...
- Navistar will soon introduce an unprecedented set of tools to bring the Connected Experience to commercial trucking...
- We’re adding reliable wireless networks & advanced OCC features onboard Navistar trucks. And we'll do this...
...without relying on 3rd party telematics companies
...without installing cellular devices or incurring monthly data fees, and
...without expensive hardware investments
How? With the OnCommand Smart Device
Navistar trucks will be equipped with a portable smart device -- one that's small enough to fit into the palm of your hand.
- its fully ruggedized and designed for use in commercial trucks
- it plugs directly into the diagnostics port
- with no wires, & no external antenna
From a phone or tablet, users will run a mobile app that connects to the smart device through a secure wireless connection.
The smart device is an aftermarket It’s a Linux-based computer with enough CPU power, RAM, and flash memory to deliver important strategic capabilities, such as…
- Over the Air Reflashing - to upgrade electronic control module software without requiring a dealer visit
- Electronic Data Logging - for HOS Hours of Service compliance & transmission of Health Report data
- Smart Repair Routing - to quickly address maintenance needs as they arise
- The Accelerator® Write Up Tool - to expedite & improve the service lane intake process
A day in the life...
Let’s take a brief glimpse at these capabilities, how they're used, and why they matter from a Customer, Dealer, and Navistar perspective.
I would suggest the following edits: Change this From a phone or tablet, users will run a mobile app that connects to the smart device through a secure wireless connection. TO From any mobile device, users will run a mobile app that connects to the smart device through a secure wireless connection. |